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You quickly ran down the long corridors to the girls dorm. Your Heart thumping madly against your chest as panic ran through your body. Once you made it to the girls dorm you quickly swung the door open and closed it behind you leaning your back against it trying to catch your breath. You could hear a faint voice creep down the halls "(y/n)~" Eren cooed making his way to where you were. Adrenaline ran trough your vanes.

You quickly turned around and locked the door and backed away from it trying not to make a sound. You could hear foot steps approaching the door 'step...step...step...step' It had got louder and louder, your heart thumping so loudly that you were sure it could be heard through the other end of the door. Suddenly the steps stopped, it was nothing but silence until Yeager boy spoke up "(y/n) are you in there?~" he said as his hand went for the doorknob failing to turn it for it was locked "(y/n)~ unlock the door please~" you had said nothing sucking in your breath trying your best to keep quiet. He rattled the doorknob anxiously "(y/n)...(y/n)...(y/n)" he said in a singsong voice as he kept rattling the doorknob. "I have to hide, Now!" You thought to your self, for you knew he would find a way in, he would even most likely break down the damn door from losing his patience.

You panicked, there was hardly any hiding places "out of all the places I run to the girls dorm" you regretted your decision but what choice did you have? He was fast, faster than you. He was the lion, you were his little mouse under his trap. The only option open to you was to hide under one of the bunk beds. You scurried over to the the bunk bed, furthest from the door. Yes hiding under a bed wasn't smart but you were to focused on getting away from him. You quickly crawled under the bed which was pressed up against the wall in the corner of the room, so you curled your self up in a ball in the corner trying to find some sort of comfort, wishing that this nightmare would end.

After several minutes, the rattling of the doorknob stopped. After seconds of silence he was knocking on the door. "(y/n)? Why won't you let me in?" You had said nothing of course but tears where beginning to pool in your (e/c) eyes, placing the back of your hand firmly against your mouth to keep you from making a sound as tears streamed down your cheeks.

Soon the knocking on the door turned into pounding. He was loosing his patience. "(y/n)!? *pound* (y/n)!? *pound* " the pounding on the door didn't stop, The sounds of the pounding made your heart thump like a horse that went loose.You covered your ears as more tears uncontrollably ran down your face. He was loosing his patience. He will find a way in. You pressed your self ever so tightly against the wall behind you hoping that you would fall through it hoping that some warp would open taking you some place else, some place further away from Eren.

The pounding stopped, was he gone? Did he give up? No. That surely can't be the case. He must be *BANG* a loud sound echoed through out the empty room interrupting your trail of thoughts. You yelped quietly, covering your mouth immediately hoping he didn't hear. He had broke down the door. "(y/n)?~"you could see his feet from under the bed. He ever so slowly took a couple steps into the room and stopped "(y/n)?...Where are you hiding (y/n)?" He cooed every time he had said your name. "Could you possibly be hiding under the beds? Hmm? You should know by now that you can't hide from me, (y/n)~" he made his way over to the first bunk bed closest to the door and peeked under it "no not here~" he said and repeated the same action to each bunk bed till he stopped in front of the bunk bed you were under.

Your heart was racing madly the adrenaline was becoming to intense, your vision was becoming all blurry from the amount of tears that had pooled in your eyes. Soon enough he looked under the bed his green eyes looking at your (e/c) orbs. He had found you, no escaping this time. "I found you~" you wanted to scream, you wanted this whole nightmare over "I told you, you couldn't hide from me forever, (y/n)" you wanted to yell at him to go away but found it hard to find your words. "G-G-Go A-Way!" You managed to say through your sobs. He had done nothing but laugh and yank you from under the bed by your arm.

"Oh silly (y/n) why would I ever want to go away from you?" He pulled in for a tight hug. It was to tight. Your back against his chest as he wrapped his strong arms around your chest, flailing to free yourself from his embrace. Air was struggling to get into your lungs "E-ren...C-ant...air..." You just wanted to scream as loud as you could, hoping that someone would come and save you. but surely that wasn't the case. Black dots started to fill in your vision, you were blacking out now. "Good night (y/n)~" was all you heard from the psycho boy as black completely filled your vision.


He was the lion, your were his little mouse, under his trap, not being able to escape from his deadly game.
So I wrote this because strangly enough I been reading a lot of yandere fics /).(\ and there arnt many Eren yandere fics out there X3 hope ya like it keep in mind that im not really much of a good writer my self XP

Tell me if you want a part 2 or something ;D 

disclamer: Eren belongs to Hajime Isayama but it seems that you belong to Eren ;)
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:iconchaosfired:
Chaosfired Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Student Artist
Dude there's a same story on watt pad too!
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Red-Phonix13 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2014  Student Artist
First paragraph last sentence and word. The word vaynes is incorrect it is actually veins. Nice story FYI.
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applefanfic Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So beautiful :iconcraiplz:
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princesssaraq Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014  Student Digital Artist
the perfect song for this www.youtube.com/watch?v=6PGISx… :lol: rvmp 
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katotoko Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
omfg i love that song so much, especially the character he's singing as <3

but i atually got more inspired by this song www.youtube.com/watch?v=caAGyH…
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princesssaraq Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014  Student Digital Artist
you should make Eren x yandere!reader hide and seek ps love the song kirisaki carnivel and hide and seek!
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:iconkatotoko:
katotoko Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I also like the full version to Grateful Dead March >w< I guess you could say its more phsycotic than kirisaki carnival if that's how to put it. It's one of kanato's character songs
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princesssaraq Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014  Student Digital Artist
love that song too but still you have to make Eren x Yandere!Reader Hide and Seek. that would be amazing ^_^
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Sallade Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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SakuraTreeLake Featured By Owner Edited Jul 24, 2014  Student General Artist
Yandere stories are life, much like yours!
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00ponytail00 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love how your profile pic is good Eren and the story is about crazy Eren. I LOVE IT!!!
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:iconkatotoko:
katotoko Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XDDDD omfg lets just say im messed up, but thanks!!!
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Nightstardoesart Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh fuck....
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SoulsGF Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I adore these kinds of stories... is that wrong to?
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xXKimberIsAwesomeXx Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014
Not at all!


They make me feel happy.
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SoulsGF Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yay! I am not the only one!
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xXKimberIsAwesomeXx Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014
Yay! Happy friend high-five!
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SoulsGF Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*HIGH-FIVES*
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xXKimberIsAwesomeXx Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014
Awww yeeaaaahhhhh~

I dub you my freind now.
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SoulsGF Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awesome!!!
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xXKimberIsAwesomeXx Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014
Yay~
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:iconkatotoko:
katotoko Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
not at all....im kinda into really creepy/phycotic things my self....so your not alone X3
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SoulsGF Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yay!
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Scourgeyluver00 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Eren has already made my 'creepy people' list, the picture doesn't help him much.
Eren scares me *hides in dark corner*
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katotoko Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hehe i drew it uwu, i tried to make it extra creepy for this story X3
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Lunime Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Student Writer
Is it weird that I like Yandere Fics?
....Sometimes I laugh at reader-chan's misfortune...
yeah something's wrong
Panda Emoji-04 (Down) [V1] 
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:iconkatotoko:
katotoko Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
shhhh im not totally obsessed with yandere fics or anything X3 your not the only one
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:iconlunime:
Lunime Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Student Writer
Shhhh...
Our secret!
the shh revamped 
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shiny-eve Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014
well shit 
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:iconchocolatechipcookie4:
part 2, please! things seem to be getting interesting :)
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SoulEvans12 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Well, I'm scared, 
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animefan707 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
O.O
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heatherbacon Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
part 2 o-o
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lickmytrickster Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Part 2 please, this is really interesting~! ^_^
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:iconkatotoko:
katotoko Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ill try to get it up as soon as possible \(*゚▽゚*)/
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SkeletonDolly Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Yeah! Part II, part II !
Eren is so scary... but WOW! IT WAS SO GOOD!
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:iconkatotoko:
katotoko Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha thanks! Gals you like it uwu
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black-cat-98 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014
Part 2 please:happybounce: 
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0rdinaryteen Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014
ahhhhhhhh this was so good!!!! The feeling of fear was so vivid and Eren was incredible :) another chapter please!!
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katotoko Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! ;u; I will try to get a new chapter up soon ;3;
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MeganKirschtein Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Student Writer
Moar. Moar. Moar . . . M O A R. 

Holy mother of chicken this was awesome! c: A part two is requested by me please! c:
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katotoko Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hehe ok ill try to make a part 2 soon OwO
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MeganKirschtein Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Student Writer
Aha, ye! owo
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Vhenyfire Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Student Digital Artist
YandEren! YandEren! Please part 2~ Neko Emoji-16 (Blush) [V1] 
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katotoko Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha ok ill try to make a part 2 soon ^3^
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Vhenyfire Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Thank you thank you thank you
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sugarhifrootloop Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Student General Artist
yas part 2
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Alecalyx Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Student Filmographer
Is it bad that maybe I wouldn't mind yandere-ness in a guy so long as it's Eren? ^ ^;

Wonderful job! Though I do have to agree, I was a little frightened. :3
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katotoko Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD I don't see anything wrong with that at all ( ͡° ͜ ʖ  ͡°) xD
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Elezavet Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014
Make part 2, Author-san! :3 I just love yandere character >D that chapter absolutely killed me. Keep writing! <3
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